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Prince’s Army Seeks Information on Wandering Weeper Revised On (4/13/2015)

Prince’s Army Seeks Information on Wandering Weeper Revised On (4/13/2015)

Romeo Montague Wanders across Verona in Sorrow

 

Written by: Najib Hersi 

Leonardo Giovanni’s painting The Wandering Weeper

In Verona Italy, on June, 23rd, 1350, at around 7:30am-7:45am. Romeo Montague, son of lord Montague, aka the Wandering Weeper was seen roaming the streets of Verona in a sorrow state heading towards the forests near Verona             

Several eyewitnesses saw Romeo wandering the streets in the early hours of the morning making strange sobbing noises avoiding any communication with anyone that approaches him 

Romeo’s sobbing noises have frightened the citizens of Verona at the point where many are to scared to leave their homes. To stop the crisis Prince Escalus, the prince of Verona had sent his royal guard to investigate the whereabouts of Romeo and to get to the bottom of the issue.   

Montague, the head of the Montagues was asked about his concerns about Romeo he replied with, “Many a morning hath he there been seen, with tears augmenting the fresh morning’s dew, adding to clouds more clouds with his deep sighs. But all so soon as the all-cheering sun Should in the farthest east begin to draw The shady curtains from Aurora’s bed, Away from light steals home my heavy son,” (1.1.134-140).

Benvolio, the Kinsman to the Montagues said “Towards him I made but he was ware of me and stole into the convent of the forest” (1.1.125-126)

Leonardo Giovanni, a local painter was so inspired by Romeo’s story that he painted a portrait of Romeo’s shadow heading deeper towards the forest (the picture above) which he named the painting the Wandering Weeper. 

The Montagues have sent out a reward of 179 florins for anyone who finds Romeo and discovers why he is sad. Anyone who finds Romeo must contact Mercutio, the Prince’s Kinsman or Abram,  the Montague’s servingman to receive the reward

References

Afremov, Leonid. ‘Deviantart: More Collections Like 644394 503440606360537 1611887778 N By Marcusmaori’. Deviantart.com. N.p., 2015. Web. 14 Apr. 2015.

http://www.deviantart.com/morelikethis/collections/376466190?view_mode=2

 

 

Reflection

a) I consider my greatest strength as a writer is my creativity because I have been able to create very interesting and exciting stories and myths in my past english classes. My greatest weakness would be my editing skills because when I complete a writing assignment I have a habit of not editing my work properly so as a result there are plenty of grammar mistakes.

b) My approach of proofreading my work was to change the news story completely since my last copy had no relation to the play. Now my news report relates to the play, I have used references from the play, and instead of of my whole painting idea being the main focus of the news report i made it more of a side thing.

c) The hardest suggestion to implement while revising my work was making a new  subheading. This was difficult because since I had to make my news report more related to the play I couldn’t use a subheading that would turn my news report into a short story.

d) To ensure that I submit the most polished piece of work for evaluation is to edit my work more frequently. By doing this it would be easier for me to fix any big mistakes I have made and I receive the best mark possible.